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    7/31/2009

    突然有个写实构思

         这些天有些怪怪的,感受不怎么好,每天起来就不自觉的蹙着眉。坐公交上班,也是心思飘忽。
         今早赶公交上班,车一路经过众生众物,眼前仿若看电影。在一个站台等红灯,不经意看见对面的公交站台坐着一个有些漠然小女孩,表情呆滞,很不开心的样子,旁边放着一个旅行箱,还有其他几袋东西。我脑袋里忽然冒出一个词汇:幸福。那么,那小女孩看起来应该是很不幸福的神情。
          这些天看到一些新闻看到一些评论看到一些关于文化、制度等的思考,心里也一直困顿不已,这样忽然就想写一个短篇,以这个小女孩的一天的经历为线索,写一个很时代的故事。基本构思瞬间就完成了,就从大清早开始,小女孩突然惊醒,和往常一样准备要去上班,才发现是已经失业的第7天了,然后,房子也已到期,房东要涨价,没有爱人没有关系同学依靠,虽然勉强联系了一个同学可以接纳,但是心情还是很难堪。大清早就被房东要求搬出来。就这样颓废的坐在公交站台上。之后,就写她一天的故事,去劳动局办失业,等等。写写这一代人的痛,写写制度,写写社会,写写安全,写写幸福,写写思想。
         这样能行不?

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    素蕊 汪wrote:
    哈哈,我看可以……
    July 31

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